Hi,
Honest feedback. I agree with @Banno . The argument is incoherent, as written. The most obvious issue that jumps out at me is that what you seem to have is a list of premises that need clarification in order to become a good enough argument to evaluate.
For example, in premise 1, the term “reality” is vague, and the premise consists of two assertions:
- We observe reality.
- Logic is how we make sense of reality
The problem with that it that while a reader may agree with the first assertion, they may not agree with the second. Since you grouped them together, it makes your argument easier to knock down because both claims must be true together.
You should be more explicit regarding what you mean by “make sense” and, for that matter “it.”
Moving to premise 2, The term “describe” is vague to me, as is the phrase “patterns we see in the universe.” Additionally “discovered via Logic” should be a separate premise, as it requires its own evaluation. Also, I am not what you mean by “Logic.” Are you referring to Formal Logic or do you just mean something like “rational thought” or “common sense.” Finally, I am not convinced that logic “discovers” anything. In my experience, it is meant as an evaluative practice which seeks a truth value.
Premise 3 contains more than one premise, which is problematic as discussed above. Regarding the claim “logic presupposes truth” – I find it vague since, at this point, I don’t know what you mean by “logic.” Also, the term “Truth” is vague and potentially value-laden. Judging by the definition I saw you draw elsewhere (“non-contingent, Eternal precondition that creates and coheres all stable distinctions”), there’s no reason anyone should have to “give” you that definition without a fight. You should probably draft a separate argument to explain to readers what an “eternal precondition” is and why (or, how?) it “creates and coheres” “all stable distinctions.” Also, I am not certain what “all stable distinctions” means. Maybe clarify what an “unstable distinction” is? Not sure.
I will stop here, as your use of the words “Truth,” “Logic,” “Eternal Origin,” etc. make the rest very hard to follow and evaluate. Once the terms are defined and the argument structure is refined, there might be something here to debate.
All of this nonwithstanding, after making your argument, you make a statement that appears to be an unqualified assertion promoting the justification of circular arguments. Is that just a random thought, or is it meant to support what you think is your own circular argument?
Also, would you please define “non-circular ascent?” I’ve genuinely never heard of that.